Blog The Present

hi today in the extra workshop we do a challenge writing is like, you need writing what the character feel for this challenge task we do 9 sentences and we watched a video is The Present.

That my task:

Jake opened the present and then he felt so happy and surprised to have a beautiful puppy. But he saw the puppy didn't have a front leg. He felt abnormal because the puppy reflects what he is and that he can never walk well and be a normal boy, he thought his mother played a good joke on him. He dropped a little angry at the puppy but the puppy felt confused in lying on his back. The puppy lying on his back saw an illuminated red ball Seeing that beautiful ball, he ran to take but collided with a shelf door then he shook his head slightly. He takes the ball and he shoves it at Jake as a sign that he wants to play with him but he angrily ignores the puppy. The boy felt that he had no choice, so he hit the ball against a box., the puppy ran happy to the box.

thank you for reading.